Modernized adaption

Louise went back home from a long day, she opens up the TV and starting to relax. She switched it to the news channel, after staring it about a minute, she saw the news that there’s a serious car crash on the way her husband drive to work, and the scene on the TV proves that it's the same car her husband was driving in the morning. She felt sad at the start, in the next few days, she can’t stop thinking about what happened, she can’t even fall asleep, the pressure really changed her into something, her husband was everything she got. About the fifth day, she decided to kill herself. But right before the second, she died, she saw her husband came back. He was on a business in another country, his phone was not working so he couldn’t call back home. Louise really thought that he died from the car crash, but it was just another car with the same color. 

Genre: 

Setting: Time period would be nowadays, 

Character: I will use the same name in the story, but there will be only two characters in the story, Louise and her husband. 

Pivotal Moments: Louise saw the news, Louise decided to kill herself

Climax: Louise saw her husband came back


Resolution: 





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Louise just went back home, she opened up the TV and start watching the news

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She saw that theres a car crash happened on the way her husband drive to work, its a car with exactly same color.

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Shes so desperate 

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