Performance Blog JohnZ

  I maintained the fake death of Louise’s husband, and that the death of her is caused by the coming back of her husband. I change the setting of the time to modern world, for example Louise knows the  “ death ”  of her husband from TV instead of Richard. I reduced the number of characters and increased the time period between she knows the news and she suicide, so that it made more sense of the suicide of her suicide because if there are other people around her, it wasn’t supposed to be that easy for her to die in modern world, but if it’s just herself, then it will make sense for such behavior. And for my version, I changed the reason of her death to suicide instead of heart attack. Her husband came back home and saw the scene of her death. I think my strongest part now is my plot.  My weakest part would probably be the creation of the video and music, which are still things that I’m working on right now. It helped me realized that there always suppose to be...

Louise went back home from a long day, she opens up the TV and starting to relax. She switched it to the news channel, after staring it about a minute, she saw the news that there’s a serious car crash on the way her husband drive to work, and the scene on the TV proves that it's the same car her husband was driving in the morning. She felt sad at the start, in the next few days, she can’t stop thinking about what happened, she can’t even fall asleep, the pressure really changed her into something, her husband was everything she got. About the fifth day, she decided to kill herself. But right before the second, she died, she saw her husband came back. He was on a business in another country, his phone was not working so he couldn’t call back home. Louise really thought that he died from the car crash, but it was just another car with the same color.  Genre:  Setting: Time period would be nowadays,  Character: I will use the same name in the story, but there w...

Richard and Josephine ran back from a shooting, where they lost Brent, the husband. They went back to Lousie's home because it's close to where they were, the story continues from here. Change the relationship between Louise and Brent to be bad, they fight a lot and both of them want the other to die. In the end Louise died because she saw Brent came back home. (Louise arranged the shooting)