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When a person grow older, they will have completely different views about the world around us, which is the reason that we grow throughout the time. We might realize that the world around us is not that great as we thought when we are kids, we might also realize that we have different goals to fulfill in different stages of life. This poem clearly showed this point. In this poem, I will talk about how it shows how people change throughout different stages of their life.
The poem talks about the author’s different age groups and their mindset at those times. At the age of seven years old, he and his friends were pushing each other to their limits, try to do things that they can’t achieve at that period of time. But when it came to the age of eleven, he starts to writing songs and stories, try to let people that love him remember about him. At the age comes to 20, he became like a teenager, he believes that there are nothing that can stop him, he started to have goals about his life, started to get best friends that are always on his side. After another ten years, he’s 30 now, he started to thinking about life, already have his own family and children, he would take care of his kids and sing the songs to them. When he became 60 now, he thinks that the world is cold because there are no one around him, but at least he got his family, even though they don’t visit a lot.
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